I did these on a3 paper, with columns for alternate versions / compositions on the bits I'm not sure about.
This has some alt versions still. And two of the quests and the final climax bit I haven't done yet.
I annotated them to show them to Kezia for plot advice, as well as Sam who has been helping me with the writing, though [edited] they didn't end up looking at them until later when I did the online version for second showing.
Kezia's advice on the ending was mostly thinking about the metaphor stuff and what the meaning behind it is; whether defeating the fey, or working something out with them makes more thematic sense
-don't have the other quests
-finale bit..
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