Caroline's main points were to think about the dimensions/orientation between mobile and to remember to think about pacing again.
There was also a comment about it 'not looking like a comic' but I think that was purely from looking at my concept art not the thumbnails? the thumbnails are very comic shaped. It did make me realise I think I should do a more fully finished version of a page for the second showing, though.
(Also, I suspect that came from not being aware of the sheer amount of diversity of art styles and forms that comics / webcomics take these days)
Karl also suggested looking into responsive type for my speech bubbles
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