Page 7 was a bit awkwardly composed in places, when thumbnailing I kind of had reverted to storyboard mode, making all my panels landscape and a similar shape. It didn't work great with the pacing. The animation of the end part was a bit awkward too.
This is the old version:
I thumbnailed rough thoughts:
Added the new layout: (second half)
And then reanimated parts. I initially had the running, throwing, flower, faery disappearing all in different animation timelines, which was complicated and unnecessary. I put them all into the same one.
Here's a video of that all working: (after taking this I fixed the way that both running panels happen at once, there's now more of a delay before the second one starts so it looks more natural.
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