Met with Caroline today to talk about a few things
-First response in report, since I didn't get much from it? - just talk about that
-Presentation vs report & space: having it up on the screen plus on a laptop/mobile in front of them is a good idea. Don't repeat exact same thing in pres & report.
Things I wanted to ask & got feedback on the comic itself:
- page one end: add sign in background of fence image, crossover is better now
-page 7 composition/panel placement is better.
-don't need to have the faery disappear at end, just have the flower hit it and move on
-a few dialogue bits on the weeds and pg 7 got edited.
-page 8, the echoing panels should be the same size as the ones on page 1
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